Mindbloom Dossier · 04 · Written proposal

Experiment: say the payment plan out loud, one touch early.

author: Don Florencio (candidate) · date: August 14, 2026
status: proposal, seeking review · asks: growth (owner), clinical comms (copy sign-off)
format note: written async-first, on purpose

TL;DR. Cost-stalled leads never hear that programs bill monthly unless they go find the pricing page themselves. I propose adding one sentence about the monthly plan and the medical-fit refund to the second lifecycle touch for stalled leads, and measuring whether saying it early books more consults than making people discover it. One copy change, one metric, four guardrails, and a kill switch. If it moves booking by a single point, the Ledger shows what that is worth downstream.

The observation

Three facts from the public funnel (walked in piece 05):

And one voice from the real corpus (piece 01), a would-be client stalled at the exact moment this experiment targets:

Verbatim, r/TherapeuticKetamine "I want to sign up to Mindbloom but am confused by the pricing. Its says $195/session on mindbloom.com/pricing for new clients but when I go through the questions and create an account it says $386/session. What is going on here?"

The hypothesis behind the hypothesis: people do not stall because the price is large, they stall because the price arrives as a surprise, alone, with no shape. A monthly number with a refund attached has a shape.

Hypothesis

Naming the monthly payment plan and the medical-fit refund in the second re-engagement touch, before the lead asks, will lift stalled-lead consult bookings by at least one percentage point, without raising opt-outs or downstream refunds.

The test

AudienceLeads who completed the eligibility check, viewed pricing or stalled at checkout, and booked nothing within 48 hours. The consented, opted-in segment only.
ControlThe current second touch, unchanged.
TreatmentIdentical, plus one sentence:
Treatment sentence, draft for clinical comms review Worth knowing: programs are billed monthly, the starter works out to $430 a month for three months, and if our clinician decides treatment is not a fit for you, you get a full refund.

Dollar figures mirror the public pricing page and would track it programmatically. Copy tone matches the guarded-agent rules in the Tend prototype: plain numbers, no urgency, refund stated as protection rather than pitch.

Metrics

Sample size, in plain English

With the standard two-proportion math: if the baseline stalled-lead booking rate is around 8 percent, detecting a 1.5 point lift at 80 percent power and the usual 5 percent significance needs roughly 5,200 leads per arm. At 4,000 completed checks a month and a plausible stall share, that is a several-week test, not a several-day one. The honest version of this section needs the real baseline from the warehouse; the method stands either way, and I would rather state the assumption than fake the precision.

Kill criteria, decided before launch

Decision rule

Ship the sentence to all stalled-lead cadences if the primary lifts at least one point with flat guardrails. If it lifts less than that but replies show cost questions arriving earlier and warmer, run the follow-up test (same sentence, first touch instead of second) before deciding. If guardrails degrade, the candor thesis is wrong in this form, and that is worth knowing on paper too.

Why this experiment first

It is the cheapest test that can validate the most important thesis in this dossier: that cost candor converts the nervous middle better than cost hide-and-seek. One sentence, no design work, no new surface, guarded by metrics the team already trusts. And if one point of booking is real, the Ledger's arithmetic says the downstream value funds a lot of week twos.

Known unknowns, stated plainly: I do not have the real baseline rates, the internal cadence copy, or the compliance rules on price display in SMS, which is why the first named reviewer is clinical comms, not growth.